So Freakin Talented!!
I just had to post this cause I am so proud of my baby, he's a poet and I didn't even know it...Jacob my 11 yr old had to write a poem for his 5th grade class and since he goes to a christian school it was about two brothers in the Bible, Jacob and Esau. Here it is folks be ready to be amazed.
Jacob and Esau
By: Jacob
Jacob was Esau's brother
Jacob was loved by his mother
Esau was a hard working man
While Jacob and his mother were forming a plan
For Jacob to steal his brothers birthright
Esau got pretty mad alright
Esau wanted to kill Jacob dead
But Jacob ran to Haran instead
While Jacob was asleep in the dark
In a dream God promised him a new start
He would someday own this land
If he would give in to Gods comand.
Can you see the sheer, raw, talent. I mean realy can ya!!
I definnately think there is a future poet here!
Jacob and Esau
By: Jacob
Jacob was Esau's brother
Jacob was loved by his mother
Esau was a hard working man
While Jacob and his mother were forming a plan
For Jacob to steal his brothers birthright
Esau got pretty mad alright
Esau wanted to kill Jacob dead
But Jacob ran to Haran instead
While Jacob was asleep in the dark
In a dream God promised him a new start
He would someday own this land
If he would give in to Gods comand.
Can you see the sheer, raw, talent. I mean realy can ya!!
I definnately think there is a future poet here!
posted by Anna at 9:11 AM
2 Comments:
That's really good! I hope he got an A+.
You goofball Anna There truley is nothing in this world that can compare to the Love and approval of an awesome mom!!Jake and TJ are lucky to have you for their mom!! And Yes that is a great poem!! Way to go Jakie!!
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